- Joonas’ Project (Grade – A)
Rhetorical Awareness: Competent
Development of Ideas: Mature
Design for Medium: Developing
2. After reviewing Joonas’ project, I learned that my writing is very conversational. Compared to Joonas, I ask more questions and include the reader more in my thoughts, which is not to bash Joonas. I just think that I have a different writing style than he does.
3. I plan to revise my project by going back and adding more of the scientific rhetoric I didn’t pick up on and then implementing it the way Joonas (and also Grant) did, very clearly and to the point. I was told that my introduction could use the most work and I fully agree with that. I didn’t really have an explicit declaration of my purpose in the introduction.